Episode 3 – “Skip it”

Posted by admin on Sep 22, 2009 in News |

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Andrea
Oct 3, 2009 at 4:41 pm

Hi,
This is in response to the request for feedback.

I enjoyed watching the first three episodes of Man of Principals. It’s a cute concept. I appreciate the smart writing. I do think the delivery or pacing could be a tad quicker, and a little more animated for more comedic impact – like a tennis game. I love the character of Miss. Fernandez – I’d write her in more. The Principal needs more relevant opposition to bounce his unique character off of – to react to. I could the principal having an agenda with Miss Fernadez that underscores her presence – a good use of subtext.

I like the music, the opening door and title combo – the bookending in episode two. Keep up the good work!


 

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